Lilly Marie Thomas

[lime13579]

Lilly Marie Thomas !

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Some basics...

Name» Lilly Marie Thomas
Nickname(s)» None
Date of Birth» April 13 1996
Place of Birth» London, England
Age» 16
Grade» 11
School» Veritas
Sports Team» Cheerleader

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Sexual Orientation» Hetero
Hair Colour and Style» Blonds and normally Curly or Straight
Eye Colour» Blue
Height» 5' 5''
Weight» 110 lbs
Distinguishing Features» She has her ears pierced.
Clothes» Normally she wears a nice dress or shirt with a skit. She is very into fashion.

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Mother» Andrea Thomas

Father» Eric Thomas

Siblings» Lilly has a little brother named Matt. He is 13 years old

Family History»
Her parents have know each other since they were 5. Their parents were very close friends and so they were together all of the time. When they turned 13 they started hanging out together more and they eventually fell in love. They got married when they were 23 and they had Lilly a year later.

Both of Lilly's parents have super abilities. Her mother has the power of mind control, but she doesn't use it very often, and her father has enhanced memory. The one thing that surprised her parents is that her younger brother Matt didn't have a super ability.

Lilly and her family originally lived in London. There she attended a regular school with her brother and her parents owned and operated their own store. When she turned 13 she got a letter from Veritas asking if she wanted to join their school. Lilly wanted to stay in London but her parents wanted her to go to Veritas and learn how to control her powers, so after she finished 8th grade, her family moved to Cranbrook, Canada.

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Personality» Lily is a very bubbly, energetic person. She is a fun person to be around. She is also very funny, she likes to just joke around and have fun. She doesn't take stuff to seriously because she is trying live her life to the fullest before she becomes an adult and has to take things seriously. She is also very talkative. She is the person that would sit on the phone talking to you for hours about random stuff just to waste time. She is also very sweet. She is one of the nicest people you will ever meet. When people first see her, they think that she is going to be stuck up because she is a blonde haired blue eyed girl that is on the school cheer team, but in reality she isn't.
Likes -
*Clothes
*Shopping
*Anything Sparkly
*Parties
*Hanging out with Friends
*Weekends
*Cheer practice
*French
*Music
Dislikes -
*Dark Colors
*Math
*Science
*School
*Studying
*Annoying People
*Silence
*Swimming
*Rude People

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Academics»
Mathematics: C
English: A-
Biology: B-
Chemistry: B+
Physics: B+
French: A
Special Powers: A+

Powers» Lilly has the power to control minds. She likes having this power because it allows her to decided what she wants to happen for a small period of time. Its beneficial to her because then if someone is doing something that she doesn't want them to do, like yelling at her then she has the power to take over their mind and make it so that they stop yelling and do what she wants them to do.

Discovery» Lilly discovered her powers when she was 10. The first time she realized she could control people is when her brother Matt was bugging her, and she told him to go away. He nodded and walked off. After her head hurt. She thought it was kind of weird but she thought he was just being nice. Later that day, she told her brother to jump up and down, and he did. Then she told him to do a bunch of other things, and he did all of them.When he did she realize she had picked up the ability to control minds, like her mother.

Weakness/Vulnerability»
Some weakness' of her powers to control minds is that afterword she gets really bad headaches, so she tries not to use her power that much. One last weakness of her power is that sometimes if a person is strong enough, they can resist her control, which upsets her .

Some general weakness' are that she is sometimes too clingy to people that befriend her, so that scares them and the friendship ends up ending. Another general weakness is that some people get mad at hear when they realize she is using her power to control them, and they end up hating her, but she still uses her power.

Strengths»
*Can make friends easily
*Good and controlling her power
*Good and French and English
*Good at Cheerleading
*Good at sports

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Relationship Status» Single!
Friends»
Enemies»

Additional Information» The one thing that people don't remember is that she has the power to control minds. She uses that power secretly to make boys that she likes, but that don't like her back like her for a small amount of time. She also makes some people hang out with her by controlling them so that people think that she is a fun/popular person. She does this because she feels like its the only way to get people to like her and want to hang out with her. She doesn't realize that if shes herself that people will want to be with her.
Play-by» Perrie Edwards

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Name» Lime
Username» Lime13579
Roleplaying experience» About a year
Other characters» Augustus Mathews

[Admin Courtney]

Some suggestions to tidy the app up as well as a few questions:

Perhaps under her strengths you could just create a list instead of repeating 'one strength she has is this and then another is this and another is this'.
Also might I suggest adding being athletic to the list? Since she's a cheerleader and all.

You mention that she's really nice in her personality but then at the end you say she's dark, but you don't elaborate. Can you elaborate on that, because it's not evident anywhere on the bio. I'm a little confused.

Could you also tidy up the strengths and weaknesses by separating each into power strengths/weaknesses and general strengths/weaknesses?

Also, if someone has a strong will/mind/is aware of her power, would they be able to resist her mind control? That's something to add to her power weaknesses/vulnerabilities as well.

And just to repeat what I said on the chat, mind control is a really big power to have, and I'd classify as enhanced memory to be about a medium/large. Having a big and a medium power together is a bit much. So I can allow the mind control, but not a second power unless it's a lot smaller. Because if she could remember everything from when she was four, she'd have exceptional grades and stuff. Enhanced memory touches into things like photographic and eidetic memory, which is a really strong power to have if you think about it.

[lime13579]

Okay I modified it

[Admin Courtney]

What about some strengths specific to her power? Like what could it be beneficial for? All you mention about her powers is that she's good at controlling them.

Also you still have her enhanced memory up there.

And can you separate her power weaknesses and general weaknesses? They're still in one clumped paragraph.

[lime13579]

Fixed

[Admin Courtney]

Thanks. She's accepted.

You can now make your power claim (I've added the face claim already) as well as obtain a banner.